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05 Feb

The Stranger I Call Mother

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When my mother called me last September, I was surprised by how easily I still recognized the sound of her voice. When I was four years old, my father had thrown her out of our home and within a year, she was erased from my life.

My mother became like a family myth, an outcast who people only talked about when they thought I couldn’t hear them. Pictures of her were discarded, except for one that I found in our basement. Scared of being caught with it, I left it there, coming back to hold it over and over, when no one was watching. It was a photo from an amusement park, my sister and I perched beside each other on the carousel, our mother standing nearby. I recognized her auburn ponytail and held the photo close, squinting, hoping each time to bring her face more into focus. The picture proved to me she was real. I wanted more. I wanted the details of her, instead of just the blurry outlines that had come to occupy my mind.

Sometimes late at night–always at night–my sister and I whispered about her in the bedroom that we shared. We called her “You-Know-Who” because we didn’t dare speak her name. Our loving, gentle mother had become like a ghost who only came out in the dark.

We recounted our memories of her. I remembered her last night at home, my sister and I standing by the back door with her, our winter coats on. Our mother’s hand was on the doorknob, when my father demanded to know where we were going. I recall how I felt the tension viscerally. We did not end up leaving, and my sister remembers hearing the fighting, yelling and crying, after we went to bed that night. When we awoke the next morning, our mother was gone.

I saw her once when I was a teen. My sister and I snuck away one evening and arrived on her doorstep at dusk, ten years after we had last seen her. She cried and hugged us. She told us that she has always hoped we would come find her. There were cards and letters she sent, she said, things we had never received. I believed her, because I remembered the day my sister found them in a dresser drawer. Letters, birthday and Christmas cards, stashed away, threatening to blow my father’s plan- to move on as if divorce- and our mother- had never touched our lives. He had even replaced her with a new mother for us, putting life back in order, or so he thought. No one dared tell him otherwise.

I stood mute in mother’s home. She was a living, breathing person, the answer to the empty space in my heart where Mother should have been, but I was not quite ready for this. Where was my voice? I silently reprimanded myself for my passivity, my succumbence. I knew this place of no-feeling. This surrender to powerlessness, I had been here before. What I thought or felt seemed of little matter when self-agency was off the table. I knew I could not have my mother back, not yet anyway. Not when I had to go home to my father. So, I let all of my feelings -my love and my grief- stay underground. We said goodbye and I tucked her back into the past, into the far corners of my mind.

Another ten years went by and one warm fall day I saw her again when I was in my twenties, a mother myself. She met my daughters who were babies then. For the next year we engaged in an awkward attempt at reconnection. We used email a lot, because it felt safe. We could choose our words carefully. And when we did meet up in person, we were polite, tentative. In each other, we saw a reservoir of grief, each encounter a risk of prodding the pain. We looked so much alike, reminding us that at one time, before we were strangers, we were mother and daughter.

I had no idea how I would integrate her into my life, the life that did not include her, that in fact was very much built on her absence.

Besides, my father was still in my life and I didn’t know how to tell him I was reconnecting with my mother. I could not find the words. I didn’t even bother trying. Where was my authenticity? Where were my words? It felt like loss and sickness and fear. I was that child in the dark again, the one who could not say her mother’s name.

Eventually, I pushed my mother away, because this seemed like the safest thing to do.

Devastated, she said “I think your father is controlling you just like he controlled me.”

“Well you’re the one who left me with him,” I snapped back.

Not long after this aborted attempt at a reconnection, she moved to Arizona.

And then twenty years slipped by, just like that.

But last September she flew up to Massachusetts because her mother, my grandmother, was dying. On the Wednesday before Labor Day weekend, she called me. I asked about my grandmother and about my mother’s flight from Arizona. I was eager to settle on a day that I would come see her, knowing this might be our last chance to reconnect.

If not now, when?

I offered to drive to my grandmother’s house the very next day, on Cape Cod where my mother was staying. She agreed, and then we hung up.

The next morning I went through my closet…what does one wear when they haven’t seen their mother in twenty years?

It was a beautiful, sunny day driving to my grandmother’s house. When my mother answered the door, I thought how lovely she still was. I looked into her dark blue eyes, the same as mine, wanting to see my own reflection, wanting to see daughter in her eyes.

I saw my grandmother that day too, and my aunt, people who had loved me, also casualties of my parents’ divorce. Now they embraced me, welcomed me as if I had finally come home.

My mother and I walked and talked of the weather and of my grandmother’s end of life. We talked of my daughters, all grown up now, and of family resemblances and of the ocean and of her quiet life in Arizona.

I wanted to talk about the stolen years, to face everything head on, but I knew that even after all this time, her pain was still raw; I saw it in her eyes that filled with tears at the slightest mention of the past.

I can feel her regret that is so vast it could swallow her; I think her grief might turn her to particles, to the dust in the desert she lives in.

I wanted to say I wish you would move back to Massachusetts. I want to spend time with you, to make up for all the lost years. I want her to know my husband and our daughters.

I want my mother back. I don’t want her to live two thousand and five hundred and seventy-two miles away for one more day. But I don’t say this. Instead I ask, “Don’t you miss the ocean?”

When it was time for me to go, we hugged goodbye and both said how happy we were to have had this day. We agreed that we both wanted to stay in touch, but we made no promises, no unrealistic mention of all the time we would spend together, knowing she would fly back to Arizona, to her life there.

We talk on the phone sometimes now. We are still getting to know each other.

I usually keep the conversation light, because I know that’s what she needs.

But the last time we talked, I did bring up the past. I told her that I needed her to know something.

“I know you meant to bring me with you when I was four. I know that was your plan. You told me so back then. You were preparing me to leave with you; I remember.”

There was a long pause…and some tears. She was relieved that I knew this.

“I love you,” she said. “I always have.”

I said, “I love you too.” And then I asked about her day.



Dana Laquidara’s work appears in The Huffington Post, Literary Mama, and Brain, Child magazine, among other publications. She took first place at a Boston MOTH live storytelling event, performing a piece from her memoir-in-progress, You-Know-Who. She speaks on the topics of parental alienation and recovering one’s authenticity.








Dana Laquidara’s writing won an award in the 76th Writer’s Digest annual competition, memoir category, and she was the winner of the Writing Well Nonfiction contest in 2016. She is a Moth Story Slam Champion, a public speaker, and a regular contributor to the Huffington Post, among other publications. She is currently writing her memoir.

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  1. Cathy Baker

    August 26, 2018 at 11:59 am

    I’m thankful Marion Roach Smith shared this link with her readers because I feel I would’ve missed a hauntingly significant piece. I look forward to reading your memoir, Dana.

  2. Dana Schwartz

    August 26, 2018 at 1:01 pm

    I am so moved by this piece. Thank you for sharing this painful and poignant slice of your life, Dana. I look forward to reading your memoir.

  3. Dana Laquidara

    August 26, 2018 at 1:05 pm

    Thank you for sharing my essay here.

  4. Anne Peterson

    August 26, 2018 at 4:31 pm

    That was wonderful. I felt all the tension, all the longing. It made me miss my mother whom we lost when I was just sixteen. Sometimes it’s by someone’s choice, sometimes death is the intruder. Thank you so much for sharing part of a broken hearted story.

  5. Shannon Tsonis

    August 26, 2018 at 6:51 pm

    I’m not crying, I’ve got something stuck in my eye.

    The vulnerability and truth hit me hard. Thank you for sharing

  6. Dana Laquidara

    August 27, 2018 at 12:42 am

    Thank you all for your thoughtful comments on my essay. I truly appreciate the responses.

  7. Dorothy

    September 7, 2018 at 9:14 pm

    My God, I don’t often read a story that’s so similar to mine.

    I’m very glad that you and your mom can speak sometimes even if it is just to “keep things light”. It’s too late for me but it does my heart good to learn that you were able to reconnect. I can tell you cherish that golden thread of connection between you.

    I look forward to reading your memoir.

    • dana

      October 7, 2018 at 1:43 pm

      Thank you for your comment, Dorothy.. I hope I get to hear your story some day.

  8. Milton Delaney

    July 21, 2020 at 1:24 pm

    Thank you for sharing your experience, this part of you. As I read this, my mind’s eye fills in the faces of people I’ve never seen; but it also inserts and interjects my mom’s face in the role of Grandmother. Each of my three kids – who have been alienated from me and from half of their family tree, play you; but I see my younger daughter’s face because she is the one who I feel…hope will reconnect with me at some time in the future when they’re all free from their mother’s and grandmother’s control. It’s very cathartic to read your writing and I do look forward to reading your memoir in it’s entirety. Thanks again for sharing!


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